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3 minutes ago, Tom said:

I'd like to see someone milk those "cows"

I'm sure there is a video out there if you are into that thing!

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6 minutes ago, David Ayers said:

I'm sure there is a video out there if you are into that thing!

:D Not me personally sir

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6 hours ago, Ocsltd said:

Ok don't milk it.... :P

They're chewing it over?

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That Black Car is transformed with those new Photo's, Wheel Trims and Tyre Buff, looks million times nicer, much less of a "Pikey offering"  !!

Good on you for taking the advice on board ;)

Sadly you would not take what I would want to pay for it LOL, I have to steal every Car I buy or I can't be bothered to flip it ;)

That will sell now !!

Losing the pissed "Torque" Plates and turning the front Wheels great !!

One final critique, the Joggers / Trainers reflection in rear bumper might put some billies off ;)

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56 minutes ago, Gary@torquecars said:

Ok, have done more photos of the cars, see if this grabs you, now just buy if ffs lol

 

https://www.autotrader.co.uk/classified/advert/201810101355691

Like night and day. Well done for taking the advice on board and listening instead of getting upset because you were told some home truths. 

A couple of your photos need a little more care, the one of the boot for example needs centering and straightening. When you take a photo think about the subject matter being centred and level. When taking exterior photos of cars specifically. 

Also, you only have 20 images you are allowed to use. Don’t use one of them providing information (your company name and number) that can easily be found elsewhere. Use every slot to provide a new piece of information. Cram as much as you can into the page. This is where imo, lots of people go wrong with AT. The don’t think hard enough about how they can use every inch of the advert to their advantage. 

Well done on the progress. Your presentation is now significantly better. Always room for improvement of course.  

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i dont like the twin exhaust is that standard fit or has a wazock owned it previous?

boot tyre wants slicking a bit of fairy paint on the tyre rim to make it look like its never been fitted (it looks rusty and used)

boot floor cleaning

wheels in straight ahead mode

lose the picture of the headlight switch

see it can be done and dont eat pies when customer turns up;)

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Wow, quick learner - what a breath of fresh air, someone asking what to do, no argument and within 24 hours acts out the advice.  Good man.

I was also going to mention the boot being centred.

Re: you web and phone number, I would keep it in.  You're on a PAYG contract and without it there is no direct link to your website (I guess that's why you did it).

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1 hour ago, Gary@torquecars said:
1 hour ago, Gary@torquecars said:

I'll pass on them Mr Trader look to cheap . The Kia is £2,495 minimum , looking at Autotrader its £2,695 average price . 

Cheap will not sell cars any quicker on most occasions .

It can bring out the customers that cant really afford it , but it appears cheap so will stretch , BUT when it wants a new Bulb they will haunt you because they cant afford ANYTHING for it . Beware of CHEAP customers 

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1 minute ago, David Horgan said:

I'll pass on them Mr Trader look to cheap . The Kia is £2,495 minimum , looking at Autotrader its £2,695 average price . 

Cheap will not sell cars any quicker on most occasions .

It can bring out the customers that cant really afford it , but it appears cheap so will stretch , BUT when it wants a new Bulb they will haunt you because they cant afford ANYTHING for it . Beware of CHEAP customers 

So true!

That's why all my cars are reassuringly expensive..... :lol:

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2 hours ago, Ocsltd said:

So true!

That's why all my cars are reassuringly expensive..... :lol:

Absolute ditto !!

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9 hours ago, Gary@torquecars said:

Thanks all again, it’s really mooooved me..

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6 hours ago, boring dave said:

i dont like the twin exhaust is that standard fit or has a wazock owned it previous?

boot tyre wants slicking a bit of fairy paint on the tyre rim to make it look like its never been fitted (it looks rusty and used)

boot floor cleaning

wheels in straight ahead mode

lose the picture of the headlight switch

see it can be done and dont eat pies when customer turns up;)

:)

Wazzock, I haven't heard that term since school days !!

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Getting to be a lot of BULL on this thread now .

Wonder how much the Brown one is , my freezer is quite empty at present 

Bit of Angus Beef Is very tasty :)

 

On 17/10/2018 at 2:06 PM, Tom said:

I'd like to see someone milk those "cows"

That's not called MILKING Tom :)

 

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40 minutes ago, Arfur Dealy said:

Wazzock, I haven't heard that term since school days !!

A "Spawny Eyed Parrot Faced" Wazzock at that ;)

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1 hour ago, Dave2302 said:

Classic :lol::lol::lol:

"We all ran for it into the offices...." Would love to have been a fly on the wall!! Brilliant! :lol: Bloody cow-ards

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“I‎t ran the whole length of the showroom and managed to smash out the window”

 

What they didn’t include is that as it jumped out the window, apparently it told the sales guy “I’ve got a few more to see, but I will let get back to you”....  ;)

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Would that be explained by the recent reports of 'mad cow disease' 

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On 18/10/2018 at 9:29 AM, Dave2302 said:

 

One final critique, the Joggers / Trainers reflection in rear bumper might put some billies off ;)

My thoughts too

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1 hour ago, Pete CWC said:

“I‎t ran the whole length of the showroom and managed to smash out the window”

 

What they didn’t include is that as it jumped out the window, apparently it told the sales guy “I’ve got a few more to see, but I will let get back to you”....  ;)

:lol:

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