David Ayers 171 Posted October 17, 2018 3 minutes ago, Tom said: I'd like to see someone milk those "cows" I'm sure there is a video out there if you are into that thing! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 164 Posted October 17, 2018 6 minutes ago, David Ayers said: I'm sure there is a video out there if you are into that thing! Not me personally sir 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
metcars 397 Posted October 17, 2018 6 hours ago, Ocsltd said: Ok don't milk it.... They're chewing it over? 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gary@torquecars 2 Posted October 18, 2018 Thanks all again, it’s really mooooved me.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gary@torquecars 2 Posted October 18, 2018 Ok, have done more photos of the cars, see if this grabs you, now just buy if ffs lol https://www.autotrader.co.uk/classified/advert/201810101355691 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dave2302 387 Posted October 18, 2018 That Black Car is transformed with those new Photo's, Wheel Trims and Tyre Buff, looks million times nicer, much less of a "Pikey offering" !! Good on you for taking the advice on board Sadly you would not take what I would want to pay for it LOL, I have to steal every Car I buy or I can't be bothered to flip it That will sell now !! Losing the pissed "Torque" Plates and turning the front Wheels great !! One final critique, the Joggers / Trainers reflection in rear bumper might put some billies off 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EPV 631 Posted October 18, 2018 56 minutes ago, Gary@torquecars said: Ok, have done more photos of the cars, see if this grabs you, now just buy if ffs lol https://www.autotrader.co.uk/classified/advert/201810101355691 Like night and day. Well done for taking the advice on board and listening instead of getting upset because you were told some home truths. A couple of your photos need a little more care, the one of the boot for example needs centering and straightening. When you take a photo think about the subject matter being centred and level. When taking exterior photos of cars specifically. Also, you only have 20 images you are allowed to use. Don’t use one of them providing information (your company name and number) that can easily be found elsewhere. Use every slot to provide a new piece of information. Cram as much as you can into the page. This is where imo, lots of people go wrong with AT. The don’t think hard enough about how they can use every inch of the advert to their advantage. Well done on the progress. Your presentation is now significantly better. Always room for improvement of course. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
It's me 615 Posted October 18, 2018 i dont like the twin exhaust is that standard fit or has a wazock owned it previous? boot tyre wants slicking a bit of fairy paint on the tyre rim to make it look like its never been fitted (it looks rusty and used) boot floor cleaning wheels in straight ahead mode lose the picture of the headlight switch see it can be done and dont eat pies when customer turns up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mark101 536 Posted October 18, 2018 Wow, quick learner - what a breath of fresh air, someone asking what to do, no argument and within 24 hours acts out the advice. Good man. I was also going to mention the boot being centred. Re: you web and phone number, I would keep it in. You're on a PAYG contract and without it there is no direct link to your website (I guess that's why you did it). Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gary@torquecars 2 Posted October 18, 2018 Thanks will sort through the points, in the meantime here are the other 2! https://www.autotrader.co.uk/classified/advert/201810101355693 https://www.autotrader.co.uk/classified/advert/201810101355694 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Horgan 564 Posted October 18, 2018 1 hour ago, Gary@torquecars said: Thanks will sort through the points, in the meantime here are the other 2! https://www.autotrader.co.uk/classified/advert/201810101355693 https://www.autotrader.co.uk/classified/advert/201810101355694 1 hour ago, Gary@torquecars said: Thanks will sort through the points, in the meantime here are the other 2! https://www.autotrader.co.uk/classified/advert/201810101355693 https://www.autotrader.co.uk/classified/advert/201810101355694 I'll pass on them Mr Trader look to cheap . The Kia is £2,495 minimum , looking at Autotrader its £2,695 average price . Cheap will not sell cars any quicker on most occasions . It can bring out the customers that cant really afford it , but it appears cheap so will stretch , BUT when it wants a new Bulb they will haunt you because they cant afford ANYTHING for it . Beware of CHEAP customers Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ocsltd 133 Posted October 18, 2018 1 minute ago, David Horgan said: I'll pass on them Mr Trader look to cheap . The Kia is £2,495 minimum , looking at Autotrader its £2,695 average price . Cheap will not sell cars any quicker on most occasions . It can bring out the customers that cant really afford it , but it appears cheap so will stretch , BUT when it wants a new Bulb they will haunt you because they cant afford ANYTHING for it . Beware of CHEAP customers So true! That's why all my cars are reassuringly expensive..... 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dave2302 387 Posted October 18, 2018 2 hours ago, Ocsltd said: So true! That's why all my cars are reassuringly expensive..... Absolute ditto !! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arfur Dealy 823 Posted October 18, 2018 9 hours ago, Gary@torquecars said: Thanks all again, it’s really mooooved me.. like 6 hours ago, boring dave said: i dont like the twin exhaust is that standard fit or has a wazock owned it previous? boot tyre wants slicking a bit of fairy paint on the tyre rim to make it look like its never been fitted (it looks rusty and used) boot floor cleaning wheels in straight ahead mode lose the picture of the headlight switch see it can be done and dont eat pies when customer turns up Wazzock, I haven't heard that term since school days !! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Horgan 564 Posted October 18, 2018 Getting to be a lot of BULL on this thread now . Wonder how much the Brown one is , my freezer is quite empty at present Bit of Angus Beef Is very tasty On 17/10/2018 at 2:06 PM, Tom said: I'd like to see someone milk those "cows" That's not called MILKING Tom Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dave2302 387 Posted October 18, 2018 40 minutes ago, Arfur Dealy said: Wazzock, I haven't heard that term since school days !! A "Spawny Eyed Parrot Faced" Wazzock at that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pete CWC 4 Posted October 18, 2018 And in today's news: https://www.am-online.com/news/dealer-news/2018/10/18/escaped-cow-causes-chaos-inside-arnold-clark-mazda-showroom Perhaps it was looking for a Pixo...? 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dave2302 387 Posted October 19, 2018 12 hours ago, Pete CWC said: And in today's news: https://www.am-online.com/news/dealer-news/2018/10/18/escaped-cow-causes-chaos-inside-arnold-clark-mazda-showroom Perhaps it was looking for a Pixo...? Classic Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ocsltd 133 Posted October 19, 2018 1 hour ago, Dave2302 said: Classic "We all ran for it into the offices...." Would love to have been a fly on the wall!! Brilliant! Bloody cow-ards Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pete CWC 4 Posted October 19, 2018 “It ran the whole length of the showroom and managed to smash out the window” What they didn’t include is that as it jumped out the window, apparently it told the sales guy “I’ve got a few more to see, but I will let get back to you”.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
metcars 397 Posted October 19, 2018 Would that be explained by the recent reports of 'mad cow disease' Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MOTORS 25 Posted October 19, 2018 On 18/10/2018 at 9:29 AM, Dave2302 said: One final critique, the Joggers / Trainers reflection in rear bumper might put some billies off My thoughts too Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dave2302 387 Posted October 19, 2018 1 hour ago, Pete CWC said: “It ran the whole length of the showroom and managed to smash out the window” What they didn’t include is that as it jumped out the window, apparently it told the sales guy “I’ve got a few more to see, but I will let get back to you”.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
It's me 615 Posted October 19, 2018 (edited) i think this is fake news and a publicity stunt pull the udder one meanwhile back on planet earth http://www.cityam.com/266171/auto-dealer-pendragons-shares-tumble-fresh-profit-warning Edited October 19, 2018 by boring dave tft6f Share this post Link to post Share on other sites