basildon car sales 17 Posted October 14, 2016 Hi just to let everyone know that has helped and for some feedback as im doing changes next week but finally 2 years of deciding finally got the finished products ready to show everyone. When business was quite a lot of people criticized the website so here it is the finish products please feel free to give your honest thoughts anything they dont like thank you in advance. www.basildoncarsales.co.uk Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
M.J 35 Posted October 14, 2016 (edited) Better than the old site, nice and modern clean looking, easy to navigate However you don't have any images of your actual cars on the home page which i think is essential, otherwise it just looks like a generic car site, I would personally put a slideshow/carousel of a section of your stock running length ways across the site, in the place of the 'our partners' logos Also at the moment your slogan is 'BASILDON CAR SALES, SPECIALISE IN GERMAN CARS AND HAVE IN HOUSE FINANCE FACILITIES That is not grammatically correct BASILDON CAR SALES, THE SPECIALIST GERMAN CAR DEALERSHIP or BASILDON CAR SALES, SPECIALISING IN GERMAN CARS AND VEHICLE FINANCE I'd personally leave out the finance part and keep it simple, something like: BASILDON CAR SALES, SPECIALISING IN GERMAN CARS Edited October 14, 2016 by M.J 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Steve92 80 Posted October 14, 2016 I hate capitals, but that comes from working at a hard of hearing charity where capitals were seen as shouting. i drive by your site on Wednesday:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
basildon car sales 17 Posted October 15, 2016 12 hours ago, Steve92 said: I hate capitals, but that comes from working at a hard of hearing charity where capitals were seen as shouting. i drive by your site on Wednesday:) steve why not pop in and say hello !!! 15 hours ago, M.J said: Better than the old site, nice and modern clean looking, easy to navigate However you don't have any images of your actual cars on the home page which i think is essential, otherwise it just looks like a generic car site, I would personally put a slideshow/carousel of a section of your stock running length ways across the site, in the place of the 'our partners' logos Also at the moment your slogan is 'BASILDON CAR SALES, SPECIALISE IN GERMAN CARS AND HAVE IN HOUSE FINANCE FACILITIES That is not grammatically correct BASILDON CAR SALES, THE SPECIALIST GERMAN CAR DEALERSHIP or BASILDON CAR SALES, SPECIALISING IN GERMAN CARS AND VEHICLE FINANCE I'd personally leave out the finance part and keep it simple, something like: BASILDON CAR SALES, SPECIALISING IN GERMAN CARS thats temp text will all be changed on monday that site was launched in rush as autotrader site went dead thanks for the reply kind regards Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Steve92 80 Posted October 16, 2016 By the time I realised I had gone past, then a transit doing 40 heading towards me on the path distracted me further Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jon Hickey 2 Posted October 17, 2016 Nice new site Danny, only one thing that I would pick up on outside of the other comments - the main picture of the site you use, is centred on a different site offering guaranteed car finance, and your site if off to the right, almost in the background - the other site and their phone number are in the prominent position. Might be worth a new picture of just your site? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bestprice4cash 20 Posted October 17, 2016 The "about us" write up could do with a bit of rewording IMO. As already mentioned there are some grammatical errors on the first page. - if these things aren't your strong point it might be worth paying someone a bit of change to proof read it and just polish it up a bit. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cathleen Certain 0 Posted October 24, 2016 i also noticed some grammatical errors, but the site is way much better. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
