NEW WEBSITE GONE LIVE THOUGHTS PLEASE

[basildon car sales 17]

Hi just to let everyone know that has helped and for some feedback as im doing changes next week but finally 2 years of deciding finally got the finished products ready to show everyone.

 

When business was quite a lot of people criticized the website so here it is the finish products please feel free to give your honest thoughts anything they dont like thank you in advance.

 

www.basildoncarsales.co.uk 

[M.J 35]

Better than the old site, nice and modern clean looking, easy to navigate

However you don't have any images of your actual cars on the home page which i think is essential, otherwise it just looks like a generic car site, I would personally put a slideshow/carousel of a section of your stock running length ways across the site, in the place of the 'our partners' logos 

Also at the moment your slogan is 'BASILDON CAR SALES, SPECIALISE IN GERMAN CARS AND HAVE IN HOUSE FINANCE FACILITIES

That is not grammatically correct

BASILDON CAR SALES, THE SPECIALIST GERMAN CAR DEALERSHIP 

or

BASILDON CAR SALES, SPECIALISING IN GERMAN CARS AND VEHICLE FINANCE

I'd personally leave out the finance part and keep it simple, something like: 

BASILDON CAR SALES, SPECIALISING IN GERMAN CARS

Edited October 14, 2016 by M.J

[Steve92 80]

I hate capitals, but that comes from working at a hard of hearing charity where capitals were seen as shouting.

i drive by your site on Wednesday:)

[basildon car sales 17]

12 hours ago, Steve92 said:

I hate capitals, but that comes from working at a hard of hearing charity where capitals were seen as shouting.

i drive by your site on Wednesday:)

steve why not pop in and say hello !!!

15 hours ago, M.J said:

Better than the old site, nice and modern clean looking, easy to navigate

However you don't have any images of your actual cars on the home page which i think is essential, otherwise it just looks like a generic car site, I would personally put a slideshow/carousel of a section of your stock running length ways across the site, in the place of the 'our partners' logos 

Also at the moment your slogan is 'BASILDON CAR SALES, SPECIALISE IN GERMAN CARS AND HAVE IN HOUSE FINANCE FACILITIES

That is not grammatically correct

BASILDON CAR SALES, THE SPECIALIST GERMAN CAR DEALERSHIP 

or

BASILDON CAR SALES, SPECIALISING IN GERMAN CARS AND VEHICLE FINANCE

I'd personally leave out the finance part and keep it simple, something like: 

BASILDON CAR SALES, SPECIALISING IN GERMAN CARS

thats temp text will all be changed on monday that site was launched in rush as autotrader site went dead

 

thanks for the reply

 

kind regards 

[Tom 164]

Much better Danny 

[Steve92 80]

By the time I realised I had gone past, then a transit doing 40 heading towards me on the path distracted me further

[Jon Hickey 2]

Nice new site Danny, only one thing that I would pick up on outside of the other comments - the main picture of the site you use, is centred on a different site offering guaranteed car finance, and your site if off to the right, almost in the background - the other site and their phone number are in the prominent position.  Might be worth a new picture of just your site?

[bestprice4cash 20]

The "about us" write up could do with a bit of rewording IMO.   As already mentioned there are some grammatical errors on the first page.    - if these things aren't your strong point it might be worth paying someone a bit of change to proof read it and just polish it up a bit. 

 

 

[Cathleen Certain 0]

i also noticed some grammatical errors, but the site is way much better.